Looking good! I totally understand your feelings in these panels. I know you were not here last week so let me know if you need the handouts or have any questions about the assignment. When you move to final, think about the size and spacing of your panels on the page. Take a look at what your classmates have posted to get ideas. Also think about the transitions - I feel like the viewer would benefit from more of a buildup to the last panel. I would love to see 4-5 mini panels of your car going up hills or other treacherous situations and barely making it, and then finally getting stuck at the top of the snowbank like you have illustrated on the last panel. Any questions let me know, and when you have a chance please email me your homework from last week. allison
Jules,
ReplyDeleteLooking good! I totally understand your feelings in these panels. I know you were not here last week so let me know if you need the handouts or have any questions about the assignment. When you move to final, think about the size and spacing of your panels on the page. Take a look at what your classmates have posted to get ideas. Also think about the transitions - I feel like the viewer would benefit from more of a buildup to the last panel. I would love to see 4-5 mini panels of your car going up hills or other treacherous situations and barely making it, and then finally getting stuck at the top of the snowbank like you have illustrated on the last panel. Any questions let me know, and when you have a chance please email me your homework from last week.
allison