My comic is about how badly my neighbors always park. My roommates and I have gotten into the habit of watching them park when we are in the kitchen, especially when we are doing dishes.
Ha I love the idea of watching people park! You have a nice use of moment-to-moment transitions with the car trying to get itself into that parking spot, I think it could use a few more panels of the car trying to get in the parking spot to really highlight the struggle. Panels 6 and 7 could be combined into one panel, maybe think about just making it a closeup of your angry face? For the panel where the car is parked, show one more panel after that with the driver getting out (so we know that is purposely where they left the car). I think that will help justify the level of anger in that final panel! Let me know if you have any questions! allison
Hi Tyler Ann,
ReplyDeleteHa I love the idea of watching people park! You have a nice use of moment-to-moment transitions with the car trying to get itself into that parking spot, I think it could use a few more panels of the car trying to get in the parking spot to really highlight the struggle. Panels 6 and 7 could be combined into one panel, maybe think about just making it a closeup of your angry face? For the panel where the car is parked, show one more panel after that with the driver getting out (so we know that is purposely where they left the car). I think that will help justify the level of anger in that final panel! Let me know if you have any questions!
allison
thanks Allison!
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