Nice job showing the passing of time with your character's face. I really like the large panel at the top. In the last four panels, are you catching a fish or just casting the line out again? Sorry it is hard to tell from the sketch. Either way, my only comment is that it might be nice to have the sun move through the sky to emphasize further time passing throughout the comic - since the main character is alone it could help make the background just as active a character. Any questions let me know!
Hi Jordan,
ReplyDeleteNice job showing the passing of time with your character's face. I really like the large panel at the top. In the last four panels, are you catching a fish or just casting the line out again? Sorry it is hard to tell from the sketch. Either way, my only comment is that it might be nice to have the sun move through the sky to emphasize further time passing throughout the comic - since the main character is alone it could help make the background just as active a character. Any questions let me know!
allison