Caitlin, Great work! I especially love the progression - out in the snow, in the desert, jungle, ocean - the humorous impact is huge and totally works! Only suggestion - around the burrito-love-bubble in panel 3, think about completing the cloud bubble and maybe see how it looks without the box around that panel before you ink it, you might not need it. For the 2nd to last panel where you are holding up the takeout bag, maybe instead think about putting the burrito on a tray or something so that it is super clear that you got the burrito. Nice job!
Caitlin,
ReplyDeleteGreat work! I especially love the progression - out in the snow, in the desert, jungle, ocean - the humorous impact is huge and totally works! Only suggestion - around the burrito-love-bubble in panel 3, think about completing the cloud bubble and maybe see how it looks without the box around that panel before you ink it, you might not need it. For the 2nd to last panel where you are holding up the takeout bag, maybe instead think about putting the burrito on a tray or something so that it is super clear that you got the burrito. Nice job!
allison