This is a summary of some of the things that happened on my trip to Disney world in early 2001: Me looking out the window, reaching the gate, seeing EPCOT's spaceship earth, riding Splash Mountain, watching Cranium Command, eating at a restaurant and seeing the characters, and going home. It contains scene-to-scene transitions and action-to-action transitions.
I would love to know if it has a good flow, or is too chaotic. Thanks, Matt.
Hi Matt,
ReplyDeleteI think it looks good - work on the clarity of the 5th panel so that we know what you are driving up to. For panels 7,8, 9,10, make sure your character looks as recognizable as he does in the airplane scenes. For panels 9 and 10, maybe make the disney characters more recognizable? Otherwise those panels might be confusing without text. Let me know if you have any questions, otherwise feel free to move on to final ink! Be sure to be careful and purposeful with your linework, and use a ruler to grid out your lines.
-allison