Here I have the moment I ate a whole Domino's pizza by myself. It starts off with myself eating a slice while watching videos on my Mac. The slices decrease in each panel until I come to a sudden realization: I ate them all.
Looking good!! My only question - not totally sure what the 3rd panel depicts. I love the progression on the pizza-dissappearing panels, maybe have your hand in there too on some of them. For the conclusion: maybe think about dividing that in to 2 panels. Since we are seeing time on your computer screen in the 2nd panel, maybe another small panel depicting shot of your computer screen showing how much time has elapsed? Then the panel of you being horrified that there is no more pizza. One other suggestion: maybe the size of the pizza box could be gigantic or more exaggerated?? Great work!
Hi Maria,
ReplyDeleteLooking good!! My only question - not totally sure what the 3rd panel depicts. I love the progression on the pizza-dissappearing panels, maybe have your hand in there too on some of them. For the conclusion: maybe think about dividing that in to 2 panels. Since we are seeing time on your computer screen in the 2nd panel, maybe another small panel depicting shot of your computer screen showing how much time has elapsed? Then the panel of you being horrified that there is no more pizza. One other suggestion: maybe the size of the pizza box could be gigantic or more exaggerated?? Great work!
allison