A one page comic about me listening to music in my room and then my jam comes on and I start singing along and get caught by my brother so embarrassing
I love the way you draw your character and the way you've drawn the room, looks great! Only suggestion would be to build up the story a bit more - on the lower left where we see you grabbing sunglasses and a hairbrush, maybe there is a 3rd panel with one more accessory to help bring it over the top. Or to keep the panel balance - in the top one you grab a hairbrush and something else (scarf?? some sort of rockstar accessory, god I sound old, you know what I mean..) and then we see it all together when you're in the last panel. Any questions let me know!
Hi Sam,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you draw your character and the way you've drawn the room, looks great! Only suggestion would be to build up the story a bit more - on the lower left where we see you grabbing sunglasses and a hairbrush, maybe there is a 3rd panel with one more accessory to help bring it over the top. Or to keep the panel balance - in the top one you grab a hairbrush and something else (scarf?? some sort of rockstar accessory, god I sound old, you know what I mean..) and then we see it all together when you're in the last panel.
Any questions let me know!
allison